Saturday, 20 April 2013

Model Answer for Advanced Composition S1W18

In preparation for the upcoming mid-year examinations, the pupils in Advanced Composition were asked to do a full Paper 1 as practice.


The following is the Situational Writing question:





Your Task

Your friend, Michael, expressed his desire to be a volunteer. He is very interested in working in the police force in the future. You came across this pamphlet and decide to tell him about it.

Write an email to Michael, telling him about the information in the pamphlet.

In your email, include the following information:
·         The date and venue of the talk
·         The internet address
·         Information of the quiz games
·         Other information in the pamphlet
·         What you think of the volunteer work

You may re-order the points. You should write in complete sentences.



Firstly, let's number the points that you have to give:


·         The date [1] and venue of the talk [2]
·         The internet address [3]
·         Information of the quiz games [4]
·         Other information in the pamphlet [5]
·         What you think of the volunteer work [6]


Now, you can respond in the following manner:


Dear Michael,

I came across a pamphlet about a Crime Prevention Talk.

The talk is from 16-20 November, 2005 [1] and it is held at Suntec City, Exhibition Halls 1 to 5. [2]

The Talk aims to highlight crime prevention awareness to the public by educating them on measures that can be adopted to build a safer community. [5] There will also be exciting games throughout the five days. Prizes will be awarded to the lucky participants who correctly complete their crime prevention quiz games. [4] You can log onto http://www.fightcrimecampaign.com.sg [3] to find out more about the talk.

I seriously think you should attend the talk as you are interested in working in the police force in the future. Not only is this volunteer work meaningful, but you may also learn things that may be useful in your future career. [6] Let me know if you are going, okay?


Cheers,
Wong Fei Hung

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