Wednesday, 30 January 2013

A Composition A Week - Situational Writing (Formal Letter)

In Semester 1 Week 8, instead of Continuous Writing, the Advanced Composition pupils did a piece of Situational Writing instead. They were asked to write a formal letter.





For the uninitiated, the writing component in the Primary School Leaving Examination (PSLE) has two components: Continuous Writing (a narrative consisting of 40 marks) and Situational Writing.


Situational Writing consists of 15 marks and pupils would be asked to write one of the following:

  • email
  • letter
  • report
  • postcard
  • notice
  • note

A quick browse of the PSLE booklets reveals that overwhelmingly, pupils are asked to write an email or letter. Pupils have been asked to write a postcard only once since the new (okay, not so new now) format of the PSLE English examination was introduced in the early 2000s. Likewise for the report, if I'm not mistaken. And it makes sense because the email and letter are documents that are used to a great degree in our daily lives. So we should make sure that our children are conversant with them.


Thus for this post, I would like to cover the proper format required for the formal letter in the PSLE English examination.


The proper format for a formal letter is:

Sunday, 27 January 2013

Spelling Lists for Semester 1 Week 8

Advanced Composition

1. commence
2. conclude
3. announce
4. preference
5. substitute
6. peruse
7. convey
8. We have put together a team of professionally qualified
culinary experts to ensure that our dishes meet the expectations
of our discerning customers.


Friday, 25 January 2013

Book Review: CROOKEDSTAR'S PROMISE

Crookedstar’s Promise by Erin Hunter



Crookedstar’s Promise is set in the world of the cats, in which cats have Clans which they live in, and they hunt and live in the forest, away from the humans. There are five Clans: ThunderClan, WindClan, RiverClan, ShadowClan and StarClan; the last Clan is not a Clan of living cats like the others, as StarClan is made of the cats who died in the past (in short, the ancestors of the other Clans). Crookedstar’s Promise is set mainly in RiverClan, with the protagonist being Stormkit, a kit who is born at the start of the book in the midst of a storm.


**SPOILERS AHEAD**

Thursday, 24 January 2013

A Composition A Week - Honesty is the Best Policy


In Learning Partners, composition writing is a very structured process. Each week, the pupils are given a theme to write on. We discuss the general structure for a story based on the theme before zooming into the exact content and vocabulary that would be used. Then the pupils are taught how to use the vocabulary given. Only after they have been taught the vocabulary do they begin writing.
We do this for a couple of reasons:

1.         Our pupils come in with varying standards of English. Some are excellent writers already. Such pupils are looking for ways to hone their skills. And then there are those who can barely string together a grammatically sound English sentence. Such a process helps to reinforce the structure of the English sentence for these pupils. Our experience shows that, generally, even very weak pupils show a marked improvement in the structure of their sentences within 6-9 months.

2.         Many pupils, even those with a firm grasp of English, do not know what to write. Other pupils have the tendency to recount an event in a very straightforward manner. Hence, if left to their own devices, they would finish a story in less than 100 words. There are also pupils whose understanding of the world is still immature and distorted. Such pupils tend to produce plots that are unbelievable or plain impossible. Thus the process they go through in Learning Partners is actually assuring and motivating for them because in the process, they not only write, but write a long story with all the bells and whistles. This actually boosts their confidence and at the same time, allows them to imbibe the story format along with the ideas and vocabulary for that particular theme.


Yet, this means that most pupils end up writing very similar compositions, which doesn’t say much for creativity. How we try to overcome that is to encourage the pupils who are stronger in English or who have a flair for the written word to personalise the story as much as they could by adding in more details/descriptions or using their own vocabulary. This week’s One Composition a Week is a great example of that – how an above-average writer customises the template that she has been handed and in the process, creates a stronger story than the original. The words in black are from the original template whereas the writer’s additions are in bolded blue.


Honesty is the Best Policy

Wednesday, 23 January 2013

Composition: Hardworking Sentences


I came across an interesting article recently. It was an online Wall Street Journal contribution by Karen Thompson Walker, author of newly published and critically acclaimed novel ‘The Age of Miracles’.



In the article, Walker talks about something that is very insightful for writers. She talks about ‘hardworking sentences’. ‘Hardworking sentences’, according to Walker, do at least more than one of the following tasks:

Sunday, 20 January 2013

Spelling Lists for Semester 1 Week 7

Tip of the week:


'Plead' & 'Sympathise'


To 'plead' is to request earnestly. It's a nicer word than 'beg' which implies a greater degree of grovelling.


'Plead' can be used in two ways:


When the bullies cornered Adam, he pleaded for mercy.   OR


When the bullies cornered Adam, he pleaded with them for mercy.


In other words, :


  • 'plead' + for + mercy/pity/one more chance/etc.
  • 'plead' + with +  


Then what happens after Adam pleaded with the bullies? Surprise, surprise, maybe the bullies have hearts of gold and they sympathised with him, thus letting him go!


To 'sympathise' (spelled 'sympathize' in the American way) is to feel someone's suffering and hence feel sorry for them.


This is the word that appeared in Semester 1 Week 6's composition and which I noticed many pupils having problems with.


Please remember: We always 'sympathise with' someone, i.e.

'sympathise' + with +   !

Friday, 18 January 2013

Book Review: CLOCKWORK ANGEL

Clockwork Angel by Cassandra Clare




Clockwork Angel is the first of the Infernal Devices Series, prequel to the Mortal Instruments Series (however, it is not necessary to read one before the other; each series can be read alone without any prior background knowledge).


**SPOILERS AHEAD**